Love Deprived, Full of Hate
"Maximus, Maximus, Maximus." Lucius Aelius Aurelius
Commodus sighed as he picked up a small wooden figure of a man and placed it in
the center of his model of the Colosseum. The wooden figure was far too
tiny to clearly bear the likeness of the new emperor's seemingly resurrected
rival, Maximus Decimus Meridius.
Commodus would never forget the way he must have looked, standing there
before his enemy whilst the latter revealed himself in the arena, that day, all
of Rome watching, his eyes wide, his lower lip trembling involuntarily, his
throat suddenly too dry to manage speech, cold sweat beading on his forehead.
The young man bit his lip as he recalled the series of emotions he'd
experienced, so many and all in only a matter of minutes.
At first he was shocked, rendered completely speechless upon hearing
Maximus' deep, husky voice and seeing his face, streaked with sweat, anger
emanating from his dark eyes in waves.
My name is Maximus Decimus Meridius, commander to the armies of the
north, general of the Felix legions, loyal servant to the true emperor, Marcus
Aurelius Father to a murdered son, husband to a murdered wife, and I will
have my vengeance, in this life or the next.
He was hurt because he'd been lied to, and he was furious at Maximus for
still being alive when he was supposed to be rotting in some forest in Germania,
dead and forgotten. Yet there he had stood, his head held high, the mob
that was Rome cheering him on as if he were some kind of god. Each
"Maximus!" they cry out like a sharp knife, stabbing through Commodus'
heart, twisting and wrenching it's way deeper inside, tearing the tender muscle
to bloody shreds.
He was confused and betrayed. Betrayed by his own trusted guards.
If they lie to me, they don't respect me. If they don't respect
me, how can they ever love me? These were the very same guards that
had served his late father so well, so faithfully, and all for the
"Greatness of Rome." Commodus scoffed at the very thought of it.
The greatness of Rome. Well what is that? While his sister
had provided an acceptable answer, Maximus was providing an even clearer one.
He was slowly but surely proving to the people that the greatness of Rome was
something that their Emperor would never be able to show them. Commodus
had not slept in days. The thoughts he'd managed to push back to the dark
corners of his mind were resurfacing. How could he enjoy a full night's
sleep while Maximus was still alive, encouraging the people to defy and hate
their Emperor, just as the gladiator, himself defied and hated his Emperor.
It would have to end, sometime. Sometime soon.
Commodus shook his head and stalked over to his balcony, looking out at
the sun setting over the great city of Rome. His city. Presumably,
at least. Maximus had been taking everything that belonged to Commodus and
claiming it as his own for the whole of the monarch's life. Rome, the
respect of his people, the love of his sister, the admiration of his nephew, and
most of all, the respect and affection of his father, Marcus Aurelius.
I search the faces of the gods for ways to please you, to make you
proud. One kind word, one full hug, when you pressed me to your chest and
held me tight, would've been like the sun on my heart for a thousand years.
What is it in me that you hate so much? All I've ever wanted is to live up
to you, Caesar. Father.
Tears brimmed Commodus' weary eyes as he remembered the look on his
father's face as he'd spoken to him, unable to control the choking sobs that
welled up in his throat, making articulate speech extremely difficult. The
tears spilled forth as he recalled the overwhelming sorrow that had washed over
him as he tried to make his father understand. Another tear for the memory
of the muffled wheezing against his chest and the hands clawing desperately at
his back as he choked every last breath from his father's feeble body till it
ceased it's struggling and went limp in his arms.
I would butcher the whole world if you would only love me!
He remembered Maximus' eyes burning into his own as he refused his hand
and walked away. They taunted him, still, depriving him of sleep and
causing him to consistently peer over his shoulder and jump at shadows. It
had turned him into a paranoid insomniac. I know what you've done, I
know what you've done! those dark eyes so filled with hate seemed to say.
It was driving Commodus mad.
In the beginning, when he'd first been appointed Emperor, he'd felt as if
he'd a firm grip on his domain. The people, the land, the politics, the
law, all of which was rapidly slipping through his fingers. All of it was
changing because of a single man. A gladiator. A slave. A man
who, according to Commodus' father should have been emperor instead of his
naive, immoral son.
Maximus, you are the son I should've had.
Although Commodus had not directly heard these words spoken with his own
ears, he had seen them reflected in how his father had behaved around the former
general. Whenever Marcus Aurelius had looked at Maximus, Commodus had seen
a deep and unconditional love, there. A love from a father to a son, and
it left him with a feeling of extreme jealously. Whenever he had looked
into the steely gray eyes of his father, he saw no signs of warmth an affection.
No love. Not once in his twenty one years of existence.
Commodus was supposed to be the most powerful man in the entire world, and
yet he felt just the opposite. So small in comparison to the great
Maximus, who, unfortunately for the Emperor, was more than living up to his
name, and getting famous for it, as well.
The Emperor had heard of little amateur plays which were performed by
commoners near the Colosseum. Plays in which he was depicted by a midget
whereas the part of Maximus was played by a giant. Plays in which the
former was always defeated and humiliated. And then the people laughed and
cheered.
Commodus stormed over to the model of the Colosseum that rested on a table
in a far corner of his bed chamber. Then, picking up the small figurine
he'd placed in the center of the replica, he said, "I never wished this
upon you, Maximus. I never wanted it to come to this. But you have
wounded me beyond the point of forgiveness. I offer you my hand," he
said, rolling the figure between his thumb and forefinger, "and you defy me
by refusing. I try to be merciful, and how do you repay my mercy?"
He held the figure up to his face, his blue-green eyes dark as storm clouds,
seething hatred swirling in them like a torrent in a mighty sea, his thin lips
curling into and angry sneer, and the edge present in his voice capable of
cutting through stone. "You defy me yet again."
Grinding his teeth together, Commodus took an elaborately decorated dagger
from the polished tabletop, it's six-inch blade glinting dangerously in the dim
candlelight. The thought crossed his mind if only for a moment. Would
anyone even care? He quickly shook himself out of it and banished the
thought from his head. No. I will not be a coward. I
am not afraid, and I will not yield. He raised the figurine to his
lips and and kissed it, then, baring his teeth, he threw the piece of wood to
the table and stabbed it through it's tiny chest, working the blade deeper and
deeper into the soft wood. "Nemo me impune lacessit*," he whispered
through dry lips. Then, he turned to a lit candle and held the dagger
above it's flame, the wooden figurine impaled on the tip of the blade. Commodus
imagined Maximus' bright red blood on the blade and smiled to himself.
"You shall not get away with this treachery, brother, not again. I
will watch you suffer as I have suffered, till the flames of my hatred have
consumed you and can burn no more. The injuries you've inflicted upon me
will not go unpunished. I promise you."
Just then, a strong and sudden wind came in from the balcony, rustling the
curtains on Commodus' canopy bed and causing the candle to flicker, then finally
go out, altogether. He stared at the extinguished candle, thin ribbons of smoke
rising to the ceiling before disappearing into thin air, the smell of burnt wood
wafting up to his nostrils.
The lump of wood which was once in the shape of a man was still glowing
brightly, the embers refusing to burn out, just as the man for whom it stood
still lived, refusing to surrender, refusing to die, ever burning
Commodus' dignity as if it were a mere piece of paper, and smothering his pride
as if it were Marcus Aurelius, himself, pressed to his son's chest, gasping for
air and finding none.
As Commodus flicked the figure to the floor and stuck the dagger's blade
into the table, a single tear fell down his cheek and onto his crimson tunica.
"If you would only love me," he whispered, closing his red-rimmed
eyes. "If only."
FIN
*no one hurts me without paying for it